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I Love rain
I don’t know why.
Sometimes makes me happy.
But sometimes make me too sad.
I don’t know why
Many stories about rain.
Rain always reminds me about everything.
The story when I was a child, teenager, adult may be old.
Today in my village is raining.
The old stories play in my mind.
Remember about funny, sad and nice stories that never lost in my mind.
Thank you rain, with you my memory is back.
Jembrana 25-12-2020 (By: Ritapinang)
10 Komentar
Amazing....
BalasHapusBoleh masukan sedikit?
Sometimes makes me..
'Rain' sll dianggap singular noun, jd kt kerja yg mengikutinya v+s/es
Tq madam i love ur suggestion
HapusMaaf beri masukan. Ok selain verb +es, untuk i don't know why bukan kalimat tanya. Di bagian my little stories when i was a child bermakna ganda. Sarannya pakai the old stories/ cerita lama lgsg plays in my mind. Btw great job Mrs. Rita. Thumbs up for you.
BalasHapusTq Bu Suyati nice suggestion.
HapusGod job. Amazing.
BalasHapusTq Pak Bajuri
HapusWaaw...amazing bu rita.. .
BalasHapusAq jg bnyk cerita ttng hujan..
ayo bu diceritakan
HapusMake me rain
BalasHapusI'll draw a story by the mouth of the water
I will make a dam filled with love
I will fill your soul with longing
😍😍😍
Mantap Bu Yus
Hapus